Today the class was working on writing a poem on our novel study, I had to do it on my book ´The Boy In Striped Pajamas.´ We did most of the sentences with an ANV (Adjective,Noun,Verb) chart. We had to put a picture in the readers mind of what was actually happening. We had to describe the scene and the situation.
Memoir Poem
The new house was significant enough, it had dull concrete walls, a tedious oak tree and a tiny yard.
Hopeless case Gretel was wondering up and down the halls.
The tiresome trees were swaying and there were weak jews wandering in the camp.
There were scary soldiers marching all around the house and dreadful Hitler was gassing. Brainwashed Nazis were banishing the innocent.
Scared. Confused. Worried.
Terrified for my life.
Hi Charlotte
ReplyDeleteThanks for the clear description, like the end sentence too and your list of verbs,
You linked the reader into these three chapters of your novel
Nice effort
Hi Charlotte,
ReplyDeleteGood job it realy tells how the person feels. it sound like it would be scary.
Danni
Room 4
Drummond primary school
Hi Charlotte,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your poem. It was very descriptive and I love your use of words.
Megan
Year 8
Drummond Primary School
Hi Charlotte,
ReplyDeleteGood Job on this post and when you discribe the scene.
Angelo
RM4
Drummond Pramary School
Hi Charlotte
ReplyDeleteI love the Adjectives you used. When you were describing the scenery I could make a picture in my head of what you were talking about.
Khali
Yr 6
Drummond Primary School
Hi Charlotte
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem.I could paint a picture in my brain. What was your favourite part?
Carey
Year6
Drummond school